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Awareness Dawning
Upon occasion, upward gaze
Reveals a cotton candy sky
Troubles simply melt away
As do the questions “why?”
Style / type:
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Candlewitch
Wed, 2022-12-28 16:33
hey Tim,
I got miles of smiles from this piece!
*hugs, Cat
*
When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
Lavender
Thu, 2022-12-29 11:11
Awareness Dawning
Hello, Tim,
Ah, the simplicity of - simplicity. Looking in the right direction for peace. I struggle just a bit with the plural of "why" - I understand we ask that same questions all the time, but maybe there could be one universal "why?"
...As does the question "why?"
Would that take away your intent?
L
RoseBlack
Thu, 2022-12-29 21:51
A simple write
That says so much...taking a step back...to enjoy the moment...all our troubles slip away...good job!
~RoseBlack~