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All Love is
What is Love
but a deprivation
of adequacy and submission
of sensuality
may be smokes of sexuality
There must be genuineness of affection
love then becomes intimate
from friendship we switch to loved ones
now becomes it
One must dream
of those passed moments
when love was deprived
moment by moment
but then salvaged by some one
from those lonely occasions
of salty utterances
by some one
Then only real love oozes
as an ultimate outcome
Come some one
love every one
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Marvel Godwyn
Sat, 2017-09-16 08:43
When there is a genuiness of
When there is genuiness of affection love becomes intimate, That is all love actually is.A true love is enfolded in an unadulterated affection. You have rightly said it all,Lovedly .A stunning poem I must say and thanks for sharing.
lovedly
Fri, 2017-09-15 14:04
your comments
stun me Marvel
thanks
hope more will enjoy
Marvel Godwyn
Fri, 2017-09-15 19:30
It's my pleasure Lovedly.
It's my pleasure Lovedly.
Chiori
Sat, 2017-09-16 06:44
nice poem
love is not all about sex, but genuineness of Affection.
i really enjoyed the poem
nice one lovedly
always remember to make a critique of other poems
using the hoe is not madness for nothing
lovedly
Sat, 2017-09-16 14:38
thank you new friends
coming from Nigeria
A place from where came
my school girl friend
Simon
Sat, 2017-09-16 07:21
It's impressing and
It's impressing and passionate