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Glider
soar
the inertia flow
the wheel turning
shinning at the hub
vortex passage
seated in the cool shade
the garden lush colours
the chains mired to hooks
in the wood slat ceiling
we rock to and fro
while hummingbirds taste
the nectar
up there the black bird
like a dream
caught in a thermal thought
rising stark and in motion
gliding when I dream
leaving this body
this freedom like a wish
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Candlewitch
Fri, 2011-07-22 11:07
Hello,
gliding when I dream
leaving this body
this freedom like a wish
almost like astral travel... I liked this poem very much.
always, Cat
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Esker
Sun, 2011-07-31 14:36
in the glean of gleaming
was forever trying to see around,
or sometimes through...
realizing its in the curve of intuition
"astral travel" .. yes i remember now...