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Deeply Suppressing
I'm really sad
Fighting getting mad
About what I can't have
I don't wanna talk
So I'll go for a walk
And sit in a park
I'm seeing doubles
Guess, I'll blow bubbles
To mask my troubles
I'm sick at heart
My belly starts
To expand with farts
It's kinda funny
I'm feeling hungry
Can't eat or function
Deeply suppressing
My depressions
About life successes
I can't fit in
Cause, I'm too broken
To make any sense
I'm a sheep lost
In the road crossing
Counting my losses
I'll bury my head
In a sand bed
Until I'm well fed
With love and praises
Hugs and kisses
I'll stand like daises
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Comments
Barbara Writes
Sat, 2011-06-11 03:25
Ian Yeah it rhymes lol
Ibam coming uP wit some weird lines just to rhyme
Rhyming is not me best area
Practicing to become more profecient at it
How am I doing with rhymIng
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Barbara Writes
Sat, 2011-06-11 12:58
Lovely rhyming
I really like your rhyme
Can I keep for myself
I'll always give you credit for it
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Barbara Writes
Sat, 2011-06-11 20:07
Ian
Thanks
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