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STRANDED
wheat feilds
where the sweet wind wanders
and the wires sing out in
their earnest voice
let me run the pliant
course where loves
wound weeps
and let me lay my head
beneath the stark and
reaching heavens
the wild thrill
for taming dreams
spill spill
glitter garland glam
let these rakish bejewelled
delights be free from heist
for youve stolen me from
lesser plans
and built your fortress
Style / type:
Free verse
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Comments
weirdelf
Wed, 2013-02-27 07:27
21 months and no comment?
This is beautiful language, meaningful and lovely.
cheers,
Jess
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Esker
Wed, 2013-02-27 07:43
again this is an internal portrail
potrayle poatrayl I have dislezia
people made me stop and lay in
the grass to watch clouds once or sit
on a rock and be calm for fifteen
minutes....a little stream
minnows flashing in the fluid
the sky above haunted with clouds
the forest dark and wild
i remember that still
this poem was like that
a quiet moment in the mundane
madness
Thank You!