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“I Love You”
I love you more than moonlight
Shining on a dark night
More than sunlight
Peeking through treetops
I love you more than rain
Falling on a hot day
More than shade
Blocking the heat wave
I love you more
Walking the strand
Smooching by the starlight
This humid summer night
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Barbara Writes
Sat, 2011-05-14 01:43
After the drugs poem softer was needed i think
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