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Kaskade
bite thick this flesh
arc bright the flash
of blade
where frost steams
beneath springs
rapture
and bird dark rain
winds cascade
life for buried seed
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Comments
Roscoe Lane
Mon, 2011-03-21 14:58
I'm thinking,
I'm thinking this is rebirth we're reading about, if not still well put together.I love reading your poems , though i may not always understand. I love that line , where frost steams beneath springs rapture. Great write again. Regards Roscoe..
Roscoe Llane,
Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.
lou
Tue, 2011-03-22 04:55
Esker
I just love your use of the English language. I can find no fault.
love lou
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!
Esker
Sat, 2011-03-26 10:54
loving people seems difficult
but the language is something one can
its always been a passion and its somewhat
more forgiving
Ive lived more in books then I have in life
how absurd sometimes
but Im happy with poetry
and its writes
it keeps me moving in my day
gets me away from the room
and I fall into a routine
of arriving here
and leaving