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teenage transformation
galls all over -----angst....
in the world of transformation girl,
you dwell
this kind of story many do tell...
when moms and pops are at tangents drawn
kids do more than often feel forlorn ….
love them,
for even though growing up,
they don't at times act like grown up
so you are the thread
to bind them together
and
with your unfathomable love
they will live forever together,
this I can only hope to say,
because teenagers many,
have lead the life ,
you lead today
many have lead and become grown
young lass don’t you ever moan…..
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Comments
Frenchf
Thu, 2013-02-21 07:33
Thank you
For explaining to us what we should all remember
loved
Thu, 2013-02-21 09:08
ok
happy u be
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Ian.T
Fri, 2013-02-22 06:19
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A good reminder, but I give all babies and young children back to their parents and the teenagers I keep at a distance in case they corrupt my ways lol, Good write there young Bard, Yours Ian.T
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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Fri, 2013-02-22 07:16
thanks
so far 300 have liked it across the Internet
and some have translated it into Spanish too..
GREAT feeling for poets pseudo like me..
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