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Never-ending Story
Blossomed daffodils
gracing windowsills
bluebells bloom
lighting the gloom
fields of green
lush and serene
silver birch trees
whistling in the breeze
natures glory
never-ending story
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Structured: Western
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Comments
sueb
Sat, 2013-01-26 18:21
nature
nature
Seren
Sun, 2013-01-27 04:48
Natures story
Natures story
never-ending glory
just another way those two lines could go nice nature poem Sue
Jayne-Chloe xxx
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
sueb
Sun, 2013-01-27 07:23
thanks glad you enjoyed this
thanks glad you enjoyed this little one x