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An Apparent Friendship
I can think of but one thing
that can help me through my day,
and that's the fact we are so close
my greatest blessing to come my way.
I often wonder what I did
to deserve such a true, close friend;
some might conclude I'm just a lucky guy
by how much quality time we spend.
A good relationship takes serious effort
from both of the parties involved,
we've spent a lot of time learning together
that any problem can be solved !
We try and keep expectations low
and to have an understanding view,
towards everything life hurls our way
so we can focus on all that's true.
I so cherish your existence
and all we've been allowed to share;
you are my best friend, and my mother
a combination that's truely rare !
Style / type:
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction):
What did you think of my title?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Last few words:
For my mom; Antoinette Marie.
Editing stage:
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Comments
Seren
Sat, 2013-01-26 02:32
Dear Doc
I remember your mum and I can say what a beautiful soul she is
This is a wonderful tribute
sigh a lovely poem any mother would be proud of
Bravo
Love Jc xxxx
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
Frenchf
Sat, 2013-01-26 16:44
You are lucky
Mother and friend. Do people on neopoet visit?