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Worries from past
sabotaging present
old memories
haunting tapestries
woven into now
wish they'd take a bow
and exit stage door
don't want them anymore
Style / type:
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing stage:
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Comments
Frenchf
Fri, 2013-01-04 09:03
Well done back on track
Interesting that when temporarily depressed the quality of your work fell
sueb
Fri, 2013-01-04 09:38
thanks a mil x
thanks a mil x
Seren
Fri, 2013-01-04 09:42
I like this one Sue I can't
I like this one Sue I can't find anything to crit
Well done
Jc ~
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
sueb
Fri, 2013-01-04 09:45
thanks a mil so glad u
thanks a mil so glad u enjoyed this little one all the best cheers sueb x