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Gran's Diet
Sausages and chips,
sauces and dips,
thoughts of them
has me licking my lips
forgetting the hips
So I'm going to back away
as I remember
what my granny used to say
makes me smile
as I recall her sniggers
"little pickers, bigger knickers"
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Structured: Western
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Comments
Frenchf
Mon, 2012-12-31 21:51
Love your gran
Great ditty.
sueb
Tue, 2013-01-01 09:44
thanks a mil x
thanks a mil x
weirdelf
Tue, 2013-01-01 06:19
cute
but who has body image issues?
cheers,
Jess
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sueb
Tue, 2013-01-01 09:45
thanks jess think we all have
thanks jess think we all have in one form or another
Ian.T
Thu, 2013-01-10 02:58
Sueb
Have read several of your poems in fact all of them, that I haven't commented much is that I was waiting for a longish serious piece from you, as I sit here listening to Danny Boy and the lyrics are telling me a story would just love to here such a story from your pen, Yours Ian.T
.
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So find more reasons to believe in others..
sueb
Thu, 2013-01-10 04:54
Hi Ian I'm as deep as a
Hi Ian I'm as deep as a puddle but I will try a more serious one but I've been told their soppy maybe I'm better with the humor have a gr8 day all the best Sueb x