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All In
Oh blissfull day
that's come my way,
it's good to be at home!
It took som time
to make this rhyme,
I had to write it on the roam;
creative sparks emits my dome.
~
Morning delight
it just feels right,
'tis nice to be alive;
on words I feed
to fill my need,
even shadows wish to thrive;
alive in sunlight they try and strive.
~
Good day, kind sirs
things could be worse,
as night becoes from day;
night's skies await
the perptude of fate,
shadows dwnse, so the odds can sway;
all in ! For the perpetual day !
Style / type:
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction):
Is the internal logic consistent?
Last few words:
Let me have it !
Editing stage:
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Comments
Rula
Wed, 2012-06-27 00:15
Good morning docmaverick
It is sure nice to be alive
and read your words
today!
yesterday is a past , today is present , the future is unknown
so let's live the day
Loved this for its simplicity . it reads even like a prayer
Enjoyed the read indeed
Have a nice day sir.
❤❤❤❤❤❤
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docmaverick
Wed, 2012-06-27 02:02
And a "good day", to you too...Ms. Rula....
...thanx ever so much for reading me. I know my style is a tad, frustrating.
Sincerely, thanx!
docmaverick.
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Ian.T
Wed, 2012-06-27 02:50
Doc
A good Morning to you,
There seems to be a lot of spelling things that came in with the sunrise,
great to read your fun runs,
Yours Ian.T
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