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No Burden
She asks me if these are the pants she should wear.
Or, would another glass of wine be a bad idea.
Should we go out, or stay in
and watch the movie we discussed earlier in the day.
I am not burdened by any of these queries.
These simple questions are where the love lies now.
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Leslie
Sun, 2024-10-13 04:49
Michael Anthony
Simple moments and simple questions moving towards a better more full relationship. I loved your attitude. Another beuatiful poem and I get it. Thank you!
Our dreams lost! Lost on an ocean of turmoil! Soon a solution will arrive! Until then I will write!
Michael Anthony
Mon, 2024-10-14 11:17
Thank you for the kind words
Thank you for the kind words on this piece Leslie - much appreiated!
Cheers
Michael Anthony