The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

This poem, "Unresolved Souls," exhibits a strong sense of atmosphere and a keen eye for detail. The use of vivid and evocative imagery, such as "expressionless panes," "dusty shell," and "ghoul grey mist," effectively establishes a sense of desolation and eeriness.

However, the poem could benefit from a more consistent use of punctuation and capitalization. The lack of punctuation can make the poem difficult to read and understand, potentially distracting from the overall message and impact.

The narrative turn towards the end, introducing the character of ten-year-old Ben, is intriguing. However, it might be more effective if the poem provided some foreshadowing or hints about this character earlier on, to create a more cohesive narrative arc.

The use of language in the poem is generally effective, but there are some instances where the choice of words could be reviewed for clarity. For example, in the line "a stripe of abadoned unfilled living quarters," the meaning of "stripe" is unclear.

Lastly, the poem could benefit from a more careful exploration of its central theme. The title, "Unresolved Souls," suggests a focus on unresolved issues or emotions, but this theme isn't fully developed in the poem. Developing this theme more explicitly could add depth and resonance to the poem.

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This i an absolutely haunting tale for the holiday on October 31st! my favorite lines are:

with belts of ghoul grey mist
swallowing the district with
devil's swollen steam and
shadows.

a haunting scene and a more
disappointing halloween.
ten year old Ben wanted his
parents and friends to share
it with.

good luck on the contest!
*hugs, Cat