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Mis-taken Identity
Creative people
seldom
lately
rise
to
challenge greatness,
but pursue.
"Some" (like you), find attention
in lowering
the bar.
>Thomas<
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Lavender
Sun, 2023-07-09 12:52
Mis-taken Identity
Hello, Thomas,
So well written, I feel the prick of the pin!
L
Triskelion
Mon, 2023-07-10 19:12
Just a ..
..short rant on people that find their popularity in the arts by means other than genuine talent. Not directed at anyone in particular.
Thanks for reading!
Thomas
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...so like my lost dreams...the flood