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Hospice
Care issued daily
Giving a final prayer
With Family’s love
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Geezer
Sat, 2023-03-18 21:46
A good piece...
describing at home care for the critically ill. I think everyone would want a caretaker like described. Someone who takes care of the patient with love and respect. BTW, [Hospice] ~ Geezer.
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Clentin
Sun, 2023-03-19 02:35
Thank you. In life we will or
Thank you. In life we will or already have experienced the last days if those we loved
Clentin
Sun, 2023-03-19 02:37
Thank you for your comments.
Thank you for your comments. I am not an experienced poem writer. You mentioned to eliminate the caps in the poem.
What us the correct capitalisation for poems?
Thank you
Lavender
Sat, 2023-03-18 23:21
Hospice
Hello, Clentin,
Anyone familiar with hospice care understands how your words could be so brief, yet hold so much. I find them to be healing. Very tender.
L
Clentin
Sun, 2023-03-19 02:39
Thank you Lavender for
Thank you Lavender for reading my poems and for your comments
lovedly
Sun, 2023-03-19 05:08
caps what caps bare head
care issued daily
giving a final prayer
with family’s love...
see no caps and s in title could be changed to c
hospice...
''hope only speaks politely in cell eventually...''
this could be taken as acrostic
Clentin
Sun, 2023-03-19 08:38
Thank you
Thank you
C is right.thanks again!
Late at night not all is right!
I hit wrong key
Clentin
Sun, 2023-03-19 08:38
Thank you
Thank you
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