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Rainbow Mountains
Once covered with ice
Red ,white,gold, blue, ground appears
Revealing God’s work
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Mr joghe
Mon, 2023-03-06 06:06
Dear poet,
Dear poet,
I like your three lines poem.
"Words are currency of ideas and have the power to change world. Ride your pen on the rough road."
Clentin
Mon, 2023-03-06 08:19
Thank you. I appreciate you
Thank you. I appreciate you comments
Rosewood Apothecary
Mon, 2023-03-06 06:24
Nice!
Cool title. Good Haiku. Sneaking the colors in that 7 syllable line was a good choice. It is a classical Haiku in that we’ve got the theme of nature and a “cutting” word.
Tim
Clentin
Mon, 2023-03-06 08:20
Thank you. I now see that the
Thank you. I now see that the Andes mountain chain is now colored since the ice has melted
RoseBlack
Mon, 2023-03-06 18:36
Nice imagery
Rainbows are surely a beautiful sight and imagining them in mountain form gives off such amazing imagery.
~RoseBlack~
Clentin
Mon, 2023-03-06 19:25
Thank you. There are the
Thank you. There are the rainbow mountains in Peru that are real and can now be seen after the ice had melted