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Lost and Found
I lost 'me' where the foliage had to stream,
in worn out memories, and cold dreams,
on the cliffs and the gulfs of time
where willows weep with no rhyme.
Then I found 'me' - bashing
through the bright ember
of September,
A phoenix grew_
I found
You
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
Please check the form of the reversed Etheree..Give it a try, I am sure you will be satisfied.
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Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Candlewitch
Thu, 2023-01-26 14:58
dear Rula,
very interesting...how did you hear about this form of poetry?
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Rula
Thu, 2023-01-26 15:05
Dearest cat
Here find all forms of poetry.
Please enjoy
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Candlewitch
Thu, 2023-01-26 15:07
thank you!
I will be checking into it!
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Jackweb
Thu, 2023-01-26 16:16
A very
Interesting form. It gives beauty to the art.
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
Rula
Sun, 2023-01-29 01:26
Thank you
Jack. Appreciate it!
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Rosewood Apothecary
Thu, 2023-01-26 16:52
I love it
I wanna play with one line.
where willows whine* (weep) or (wail) with no rhyme.
Just a suggestion. Keeps the alliterative aspect. In the States we call them “weeping willows”
Tim
Rula
Sun, 2023-01-29 01:27
Tim
V. Much appreciate your suggestion.
Done
Thank you so much.
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Lavender
Thu, 2023-01-26 19:32
Lost and Found
Hello, Rula!
This is fun, especially with such wonderful rhyme! I love the beautiful theme and its perfect title. I always look forward to your wisdom and knowledge of structured poetry.
Thank you! xx
L
Rula
Sun, 2023-01-29 01:28
Thank you dear
Friend.
Always great to hear from you.
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RoseBlack
Fri, 2023-01-27 10:07
Powerful and symbolic
The feeling of our losing ourselves and then finding again! You have captured the emotions with vivid imagery. Well done.
~RoseBlack~
Rula
Sun, 2023-01-29 01:28
Carrie
Thank you as always.
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Rula
Sun, 2023-01-29 01:29
I am surprised
Thank you so much Mark.
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scribbler
Sat, 2023-01-28 10:31
hi desert flower. I agree with Tim on that one word.
I'll likely try this form but it usually takes this many line for long winded me to just get started lol
Rula
Sun, 2023-01-29 01:30
Stan
Please give it a try.
I am looking forward to reading it.
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Candlewitch
Sat, 2023-01-28 15:57
dear Rula,
much better
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Rula
Sun, 2023-01-29 01:30
Thank you dear
For the feedback
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Lavender
Sun, 2023-01-29 11:00
Congratulations, Rula!
Well done!
L
Rosewood Apothecary
Sun, 2023-01-29 14:32
Congratulations
Excellent job. Congratulations are in order.
Tim
Jackweb
Sun, 2023-01-29 14:35
Nice one!
Hearty Congratulations!
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb