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Punishment
I am drawn to you
Like a fish is drawn to water
But due to what I can't undo
I shall be drawn and quartered
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
Review Request (Direction):
Is the internal logic consistent?
Editing stage:
Contest:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Candlewitch
Mon, 2023-01-23 15:59
dear Poet,
interesting... I would like more information as you have snared my attention.
*hugs, Cat
*
When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
Candlewitch
Tue, 2023-01-24 13:08
hello,
I completely agree with Kat! please give feedback on others poems and also respond to comments that you GET on your poems.
*the other Cat
*
When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.