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Ring on My Hand
Three-fifteen A.M. on the clock
Rain tickles down the windowpane
I should be sound asleep right now
But I guess you could say I'm going insane
It isn't because you're my true love
A realization just hit me in the face
Baby, I've never been truly in love with you
I suppose it just felt like that was the case
You were the only guy in my lonely life
For over six and a half endless years
I remember all the times we fought and yelled
Or all the times your smile held back tears
Boy, you were all I ever knew, so it broke my heart
When I found out another girl was in your arms
I thought I loved you, but you were the only one there
That realization just hit me like I'm seeing stars
Don't get me wrong, you hold a very special spot in my heart
And I will always love you, but only as a childhood friend
I'm going to find someone who holds me, kisses me, and loves me
I realize, you aren't really the one I want to put a Ring on My Hand
Comments
Shelby Pryor
Sun, 2023-01-22 10:48
Ekaterina Alexa
Trust me, I know. Sorry if this was depressing, I just needed to get some feelings out. Guess poetry has become my punching bag lol. Thanks for the comment, I really appreciate it!
Geezer
Sun, 2023-01-22 10:02
I almost...
didn't notice when you switched from rhyme to not rhyming, it was that smooth. Nice job! ~ Geezer.
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Shelby Pryor
Sun, 2023-01-22 14:56
Geezer
Thank you so much, I'm glad it flowed good!
Jackweb
Thu, 2023-01-26 15:52
I felt
The emotions that surrounds this poem. Sometimes regrets comes at the long run in a relationship due to betrayal of trust and infidelity. This is very sad.
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
Shelby Pryor
Thu, 2023-01-26 19:30
Jackweb
Yes, it is sad. Especially when you really believed you loved that person. Thank you so much for the comment, I really appreciate it.
RoseBlack
Fri, 2023-01-27 10:18
An honest write
Been there...done that....this was well executed. Good job
~RoseBlack~
Shelby Pryor
Fri, 2023-01-27 11:01
RoseBlack
Yep. Never want to go there again lol. Thanks for the comment, I really appreciate it!