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OUR EXISTENCE
the rebellion of mankind
a sting to civilization
what a tyrannical world
©® Onyinyechi Cosmos Etu
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Candlewitch
Tue, 2023-01-10 05:47
yes!
it is...it really is!
how are you doing? you sound down in the dumps. should we be worried? nice poem.
*hugs, Cat
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Jackweb
Tue, 2023-01-10 07:23
Thanks Cat!
Yeah, I am. You got it right Cat!
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
Candlewitch
Tue, 2023-01-10 10:40
dear Onyineche,
I hope you get through your rough patch okay. yesterday we got an estimate on repairing our roof because of ice damage: 22,000 $ I hope he takes payments.
love & hugs, Cat
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When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
Jackweb
Tue, 2023-01-10 10:47
Will definitely pass through it!
Much appreciated for your concern. Wow, that's a huge amount of money for repairing. Indeed, this is a very high budget!
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
lovedly
Tue, 2023-01-10 06:21
why shout man
Title un -cap
It's like one is shouting
Jackweb
Tue, 2023-01-10 07:29
LoL!
Lovedly, I was not shouting... I have been writing all my titles that way. Check all my posts.
Thanks for stopping by.
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
Rosewood Apothecary
Tue, 2023-01-10 19:24
Indeed
Couldn’t agree more. Could disagree until I was out breath. Truly I think it’s everything.
Excellent writing
Tim
Jackweb
Wed, 2023-01-11 08:12
I will
Always appreciate you for stopping by, for reading and commenting.
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
Lavender
Tue, 2023-01-10 20:03
Our Existence
Hi, Jackweb,
Oppression in humans will only last so long, and then it takes shape in uprisings. Your title gives one a lot to think about.
L
Jackweb
Wed, 2023-01-11 08:06
What a clear view!
Perfectly seen! Sometimes I wonder how you understand things deeper. You're one of the sage men here. Thanks for reading and reviewing! .
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb