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H#9
A sea, brimmed with storm,
invites the streeting clouds to
spill light in its waves.
Style / type:
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction):
How was my language use?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Obadiah Grey
Sat, 2022-12-31 11:52
New Years eve
New Years eve
a black dog
at the door.
Lavender
Sat, 2022-12-31 15:34
Sorry to jump in
on your post, Obi, but is this haiku about a bit of traditional folklore?
I am intrigued! :)
L
Loki
Sat, 2022-12-31 23:34
Unaware of that.
Unaware of that.
Lavender
Sat, 2022-12-31 15:27
H#9
Hello, Loki,
You capture the scene in motion. I especially like the word "invites."
Thank you!
L
RoseBlack
Sat, 2022-12-31 22:47
A nice visual
I can see the afterglow of a storm against the sea so clearly. Wonderful job.
~RoseBlack~
Loki
Sat, 2022-12-31 23:32
You did that.....I just
You did that.....I just offered you a spring board.