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Wow Me... Butterfly
Blind fold me love let my hair flow
upon my face bring about a glow
see me as you wish where-ever when ever
let me feel your fingers quiver all over
sending sweet electric shocks down my spine...
lovely and fine
encircle me around my waist let me feel you hard
upon as times advance hold me tight
let me feel a comfort slight as when buds sprout about
my life would be pure bliss without an iota of doubt
just hold me once again
let me bear
the pain
of love enjoy a newer love of joy…
just hold me again yes again
let me like a butterfly
let us across bliss fly
yes fly.
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
Wow My Butterfly fun poem ah!
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Rula
Thu, 2022-12-29 05:07
Yes
This is wonderful! Full of enjoyment and love.
I really enjoyed it Lovedly.
Thanks for sharing such enjoyable work.
Much appreciate it.
❤❤❤❤❤❤
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lovedly
Thu, 2022-12-29 05:24
You are very
kind thanx
Glad you enjoyed it
Candlewitch
Thu, 2022-12-29 07:50
dear Lovedly,
exquisite poetry my dear! I think this is your best poem ever! this is worthy of Great poetry!
* hugs & love, Cat
*
When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
lovedly
Thu, 2022-12-29 12:42
GOSH
what a lovely comment
Thanks Cats
Geezer
Thu, 2022-12-29 08:18
Pretty good stuff...
Nice rhyming and not too enigmatic. [Are you alright]? Many good wishes for the New Year my friend, ~ Geez.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
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lovedly
Fri, 2022-12-30 01:54
Thans Gee
for once
Lavender
Thu, 2022-12-29 10:47
Wow Me...
Hello, Lovedly,
Elegant, and a beautiful call to love in all forms.
Lav
lovedly
Fri, 2022-12-30 13:11
WOW LAV
and I MUST thank Q
Rosewood Apothecary
Fri, 2022-12-30 05:33
There’s still enigma
Here’s my take; when I read your work I see a picture. There are focal points and movement, balance; like visual art. Your poetry is visual. It does have a certain rhythm to it that seldom feels forced or abrupt and always seems to enhance the image.
You force the reader to create a story around an image. I suspect, like a good teacher, you’ve got your ideas but the reader as the student must form their own. It’s a huge part of your style and when it works for me it’s really provocative. On occasion I’m too tired and lazy for that style. Sometimes I want to be fed without having read the menu if that makes any sense. Pure laziness of course.
This one I like a lot.
Tim
lovedly
Fri, 2022-12-30 07:24
Thanks
I am exceedingly happy
you find to read my poetry
A NONENTITY
POET me
scarcely a poet be
but howz it so many read me
rgds poet
TIM
I'm still very DIM
LOL