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GIFT OF NATURE
The mother earth is adorned with wonderful trees,
with green leaves dancing round about,
the sweet breeze smiling genuinely good,
and the giant mountain wilderness stands erect.
the gift of nature is devine embellishments,
it's beautification is the architectural hand of God,
the beautiful azure sky hanging above in greatness,
and the sun alone electrifying the entire cosmos.
the gift of nature is one the greatest expression of love,
and it is heartily proven by the visible things we've seen,
look around and see the fertility of a vast land,
the wide oceans and the sparkling streams.
The dense forests and the wide range of mountains,
the animals, birds and the insects that be.
if there's no evidence of a living God without no creation,
would all these have come to be?
©® ONYINYECHI COSMOS ETU
Comments
Lavender
Sun, 2022-10-09 17:54
Gift of Nature
Hi, Jackweb,
Mother Earth is beyond our intelligence...perfection in every way. Your poem shows gratitude and respect for our beautiful planet. I like your title a lot - it all is truly a gift.
Thank you!
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Jackweb
Sun, 2022-10-09 18:10
Wow
Thanks a bunch for reading and commenting.
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
Rosewood Apothecary
Sun, 2022-10-09 21:16
Beautiful
Very beautiful observational poetry. I’m very fond of it. I’m an atheist in regards to organized religion but you may find me reviving communion amongst the trees in the forest near my home.
Nice job,
Tim
Rosewood Apothecary
Sun, 2022-10-09 21:16
Beautiful
Very beautiful observational poetry. I’m very fond of it. I’m an atheist in regards to organized religion but you may find me reviving communion amongst the trees in the forest near my home.
Nice job,
Tim
Jackweb
Sun, 2022-10-09 23:06
Oh lovely!
Thank you so much for reading and commenting.
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
Geezer
Sat, 2022-10-15 09:58
I will...
echo the comments that have been made previously. I like your title; the body of the poem is pretty good, and I think that your understanding of English grows with every post. A couple of things I would pay particular importance to:
1]. leaves, instead of [leafs]
2]. I would use [evidence] instead of [existence].
~ Geez.
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Jackweb
Sat, 2022-10-15 10:05
Great job!
Much appreciated esteemed poet - Geezeer! Will edit right away!
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
Geezer
Sat, 2022-10-15 10:16
Yes...
Two thumbs up!
~Geez.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
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Jackweb
Sat, 2022-10-15 17:02
Thanks!
Have a great weekend!
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
Kristen H.
Sat, 2022-10-15 23:18
Congrats!
Congratulations on the win! Well deserved! This is a beautiful poem.
Jackweb
Sun, 2022-10-16 00:49
Thank you so much dear poet!
Thank you so much dear poet!
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
Rosewood Apothecary
Sun, 2022-10-16 06:32
Congratulations
Deserving. Great poem my friend.
Tim
Jackweb
Sun, 2022-10-16 06:46
Oh yes !
Thanks so much precious sister and respected poet!
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
Geezer
Sun, 2022-10-16 09:32
Congrats on your win...
Well-deserved win. ~ Geez.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
Jackweb
Sun, 2022-10-16 10:46
Thanks
Very much Geezer!
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
Ifeanyichukwu O...
Sun, 2022-10-16 12:39
Jackweb, congratulations on
Jackweb, congratulations on this win. Well-deserved. Keep improving and keep winning.
Ifeanyichukwu O...
Sun, 2022-10-16 12:40
Jackweb, congratulations on
Jackweb, congratulations on this win. Well-deserved. Keep improving and keep winning.
Jackweb
Sun, 2022-10-16 12:52
Yes bro!
Thanks so much!
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
Eftichia1
Sun, 2022-10-16 13:03
Congrats my friend !!!!!!!!!!
Congrats my friend !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Beauty poem
Jackweb
Sun, 2022-10-16 15:02
Much appreciated!
Thanks!
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
Lavender
Sun, 2022-10-16 18:12
Congratulations, Jackweb!
Well done!
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Jackweb
Sun, 2022-10-16 22:01
Thanks!
Much appreciated esteemed poet.
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
Celso G. Tertins
Mon, 2022-10-17 22:14
reminds me a bit of joyce
reminds me a bit of joyce kilmer's poem, trees. but this poem feels more about a vast beautiful country with many diverse lands in it. a showcase of earthly beauty.
Seren
Sun, 2023-02-05 09:23
Congratulations
On a very fine poem and the win!
I would edit the format some but other than that I see nothing to critique
Kind regards Seren
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
Jackweb
Sun, 2023-02-05 11:21
Thanks...
so much for reading and commenting. I'm glad you liked it
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb