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Nailed
A guy told my mom
I won't cross 13
why
thirteenth child
first seven dead
at birth or about
later another one said
I will return from heaven
I did in 77
all kept guessing
but as many say
100 years live I may
Covid's exemption is needed today
then I will live to breathe another day
come what may
Forgetmenot
Even when I die some day
certainly not today its passed away
but could be another auspicious day
one day
some day
you all could say
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
lovedly
Tue, 2022-05-03 15:54
not read OLDER POEMS
suggest some one comments to clear all unread poems as under experiment..
HOPE PAUL nominates good poets to reduce the garbage
else advise the poets to unpublish
and poets who have abandoned this site
Paul must remove their poems
Candlewitch
Wed, 2022-05-04 07:42
dear lovedly,
I know that there are a lot of much older poems on this site. maybe you should bring up this subject with Mark?
*warm hugs, Cat
*
When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
lovedly
Wed, 2022-05-04 12:01
yes I recall I started the two comments mission
before anyone another poem did commision
but who has
ears here but you cats
lol
Candlewitch
Wed, 2022-05-04 12:09
dear lovedly,
it is a sad situation!
*hugs, Cat
*
When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
lovedly
Wed, 2022-05-04 12:51
Let the waters flow
In Niagara more will come and go
let em flow
See uplift your own poem
one is you
and another Cats like you
the poem gets out of the unread
QUEUE
pass it on to MARKS may you