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Polemic Senryu
,
but you started it
yes of course I did my friend
I always do.
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Style / type:
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
Blue_Halcyon
Fri, 2011-02-18 08:26
HAHAHA LOL
Yep, that's you Jess. roflmao
It is such a secret place, the land of tears. ~Antoine de Saint-Exupéry
Kailashana2
Fri, 2011-02-18 08:54
you did not! I did!
you did not! I did!
no solipsistic bull's eye,
you missed my target!
~A
p.s. ;-)
mona
Fri, 2011-02-18 09:33
Oh my dearest friend..........
Oh my dearest friend..........
If you are talking about yourself then I will say(YES YOU DO)LOL
but you started it
yes of course I did my friend
I always do.
________________,.,.,.,.
Mona Rose
Geezer
Fri, 2011-02-18 11:26
Not me...
It's your fault
That I started it
You invite ridicule... I know, definitely not to form. But I felt the sentiment to be more important
~ Gee
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weirdelf
Fri, 2011-02-18 11:25
that's the point
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cheers,
Jess
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wolfycat
Fri, 2011-02-18 11:20
hahaha:)
"Sometimes, it's just easier to agree, than to argue about it, eh???" Loved it:)
I forgot my old signature so this one will have to do for a while!