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Midnight song
pause of time:
hark!
through the mid
night
wide awaken birds
sing;
the moon shines
away
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Last few words:
À la manière de ee. cummings’ “The Red Wheelbarrow”
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
scribbler
Mon, 2022-01-03 12:42
Hmmmm
I'm a bit unsure what to think about this but figured I'd let you know I dropped by......stan
arjiris.f.
Tue, 2022-01-04 09:32
Thank you. It’s more like a
Thank you. It’s more like a creative writing exercise, where I took a famous poem and create something similar. Either way, this poem’s concept, as well as its original, is to capture the moment,
to “shoot” a living image.
scribbler
Tue, 2022-01-04 10:14
Hmmm.....
an expanded Haiku then?
arjiris.f.
Wed, 2022-01-05 01:57
Yes, kind of.
Yes, kind of.
Jackweb
Thu, 2022-01-06 02:53
Creative moment
Mostly, creative writers embraces midnight as a preferred atmosphere for creating their thoughts on paper. But here it seems you lost the idea or the subject You intend to write. (E.g) ...the moon shines away!
"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb