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The Human Emotions
Ichor set ablaze
My rational thought is a sky clouded by subjectivity
Those that provoke shall meet only fury
For aggression is the only answer to the anger brigade
Waterfalls lower down from orbs
Rejected and dejected
I have been absorbed
By a state that is decayed yet poetic
My outer tissue is met with prickles
All are out to attack me
No one is a safe guarantee
My psyche has turned brittle
Blithe euphoria runs through my organic machine
My now elevated thought is filled with awe
A jubilated state for all
This mood is supreme
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Comments
Ray Whitaker
Thu, 2021-07-15 01:19
full of images...
I'm reminded of some lyrics from the band "Yes" off their Big Generator album.
your use of imagery is to be admired
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Midge
Mon, 2021-07-26 21:43
Ichor?
I don't see the godlike references.