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Today I Want To
Today I want to
compose a fresh poem
out of this world
no one has ever here
do you at least hear
It will not be of herd mentality
nor out of the lonely sentimentality
from woods
where once greater
(though accepted later)
Statue poets stood
I would
maybe could or should
I should
rest tomorrow continue I would
If poets confirm I need to
Else let me relax in the slumber of time
where I always stand in the oblivion of chime
now not in front but behind
as it's going to be a one
long gone time
let me think and now mime
there is left but little time
really and truly sublime
Style / type:
Free verse
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Triskelion
Thu, 2021-07-01 00:08
It is in
looking outward that we find ourselves, lovedly. Your muse is everywhere.
"Else let me relax in the slumber of time" is a really effective line.
Thomas
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...so like my lost dreams...the flood
lovedly
Thu, 2021-07-01 10:47
let me relax in the slumber of time
Let me TRISK
THANX
Geezer
Sun, 2021-07-04 09:36
Yeah...
let him relax! ~ Geez.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
lovedly
Sun, 2021-07-04 11:14
realaxing
lol
Triskelion
Sun, 2021-07-04 16:10
Aaaahhh
...the slumber of time...it's like sitting on a floaty chair in the Mediterranean...
Thomas
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...so like my lost dreams...the flood
lovedly
Sun, 2021-07-04 16:15
Thanks Thomas
Floating on a curved half boat kind like the VIKINGS lol