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A DAY IN FLORIDA
Nothing new
what do you do
Florida
is now fresh ado
lovely city
NOTHING MUCH
to woo
I missed you
some day
maybe due
not today
another day
in May I'd say
coming to Florida
for a breezy
lengthy/OK long beech day
what do you say.
Wow
where have my bikinis gone
the sea was wild
currents strong
what and when went wrong
I've had no bikinis on
since morn
I was wondering why
everyone was staring
and
smiling
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
A fun piece for FEMME'S --- LIKE it ask for more bikinis not more be quite sure
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Lavender
Thu, 2021-02-18 18:07
A Day in Florida
Hi, Lovedly,
I'm thinking the beach isn't the only thing bare, here! Clever poem, humorous ending! Since we now have about a foot of snow, Florida sounds wonderful!
Thank you!
L
lovedly
Thu, 2021-02-18 18:47
yeah
here we have 2 feet
FLORIDA is far away
sunny days
older poems r not read
when will those be fed
when I'm dead
lol
incidentally only u do the favour
and bring out my poetic flavour
while the rest waver
lol
ma'am
lovedly
Fri, 2021-02-19 11:45
HAHAHAHA LOL 15
piece of naked poetry
TNX
Geezer
Fri, 2021-02-19 16:14
Can't quite...
imagine you in a bikini, and I'm quite sure that I don't want to! LoL
~ Geez.
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lovedly
Fri, 2021-02-19 17:37
LOL GEE
YOU MUST BY NOW KNOW
SO MANY poems you miss on purpose
But when I compose a poem I
DON'T KNOW
WHETHER I AM A MAN OR WOMAN
I cover all human
all like vision
like desire
all need warmth and fire
I can't fulfill everyone's desire
so poetry salvos
I freely fire
some see me nude
some imagine
am I crude
not rude or too prude
still I love you
the bikini was borrowed
you know
inner wears
I don't wear also
BEING RETIRED AND AGED
I STAY ALL DAY AT HOME
NOW SHIFTING TO ROME
VENICE THEY SAY IS A LOVELY HOME
DID YOU NOT KNOW...