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Letter to St. Nick
Dear Santa,
I don't know if you make stops in the afterlife,
but if you do, please
give our love to our mother
We all know you're magical
Chimneys, flying reindeer
and all of that
so anything is possible
You don't have to wrap it
or put a bow on it
or anything like that
She already knows what it is
Sincerely,
Steven, Michael, Jeffery, & David Too
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Comments
Geezer
Thu, 2020-12-24 23:59
This is...
beautiful! I know that many people say that beautiful is an overused word, but I can't think of any other word to use! This is a classic. I wouldn't change a thing and it is short and sweet and to the point. This is a Norman Rockwell painting in words! My heartfelt kudos to you. ~ Geezer.
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Michael Anthony
Fri, 2020-12-25 11:25
Thank you Geezer! Very kind
Thank you Geezer! Very kind words indeed, and glad this piece touched you as it did - Merry Christmas to you and yours.
Michael Anthony
Michael Anthony
Fri, 2020-12-25 11:26
Thanks for sharing your
Thanks for sharing your thoughts, as always Teddy 15. Merry Christmas to you!
Michael Anthony
Asche Keegan
Fri, 2020-12-25 15:51
WOAH MY HEART
WOAH MY HEART
MY HEARTTTtttTTTTTTTTtt <3 <3 <3 <3
Wow, this is amazing!
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Michael Anthony
Sun, 2020-12-27 11:31
Merry Christmas, and thank
Merry Christmas, and thank you Asche!
Michael Anthony
Ray Whitaker
Sat, 2020-12-26 07:05
Touching
Very touching. I have often wondered wether or not poetry survives into the afterlife. Seems like it should...
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Michael Anthony
Sun, 2020-12-27 11:34
Grief has driven so much art
Grief has driven so much art and beauty, but I'd be okay with some writer's block in this area of inspiration = ). Thanks for your thoughts Mark!
Cheers
Michael Anthony