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Large or Small, have your fill
I thought for a while,
should I or should i not,
I had just finished one
then remembered the gospel
"only one per day"
be it large or small,
sounded cruel
so I made a large one,
then one more before bed,
then another,
finishing them one after the other
to put my mind at ease
before calling it a day,
did I cheat anyone?
I chuckled
"certainly not"
because in the end
I unchecked the option to Publish
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction):
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
c lynn brooks
Tue, 2020-07-14 16:56
Raj
One what
Chrys
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raj
Wed, 2020-07-15 01:21
Thanks Chrys
for reading ..
be well..
raj (sublime_ocean)
Lavender
Tue, 2020-07-14 21:41
Large or Small
Hi, raj,
It sounds like your muse was alive and kickin'! Hope you eventually hit the Publish button for the others! It is so true that the poem in your mind has to be finished before you can put your mind to ease.
Very nice!
L
raj
Wed, 2020-07-15 01:22
Thanks Lavendar
for reading and your comment..
be well...
raj (sublime_ocean)
lovedly
Wed, 2020-07-15 02:13
large or small
size doesn't matter at all
all is in the mind
drink as much
what else is life meant for
affect must be obtained
life is a one time bliss
you may say kiss
singer ye b
not me
raj_bby
raj
Wed, 2020-07-15 07:36
Hi Lovedly
thanks for reading
be well..
raj (sublime_ocean)
raj
Wed, 2020-07-15 10:18
Hi Teddy
thanks for the read....good to know you caught the humor....
be well friend..
raj (sublime_ocean)
Geezer
Thu, 2020-07-16 09:31
To have this...
running around in your head, plus so much more, must be like having to cut a wild horse from the herd and letting the others run free again, hoping to recapture them later. Good thing we have our electronic diaries to help out. Nice! ~ Geez.
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raj
Thu, 2020-07-16 12:38
Hi Gee
thanks for taking time to read and comment. Good to know you found it nice.
be well..
raj (sublime_ocean)
infinite_dwarf
Tue, 2020-07-28 12:42
Sneaky!
Playful sneakiness to bypass the Neopoet filters.... nice!
raj
Tue, 2020-07-28 12:45
Hi infinite dwarf..
you got it spot on ..lol..
be well..
raj (sublime_ocean)