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Sweet Mercury
If I could have been there
To hold your sweet hand
Before I’d come
I’d smooth out the sand
Quiet the ocean, silence the birds
So Your last loving song
Is all that I heard
K. Mulroney
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Comments
c lynn brooks
Fri, 2019-12-06 14:54
Rottie
This poem is power packed with emotion it brought me to tears you clearly know your business
Chrys
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Edna Sweetlove
Sun, 2019-12-15 19:47
Line 3...
..is open to misinterpretation...
xxx
Edna
Poet(ess) to the Stars
Rottiestyl
Wed, 2019-12-18 09:19
You
Have a problem
Rottie
Pegasus was a genius,
living within a suit of difference.
He liked what he was,
nodded in respect and
simply flew . . . away.
By: K. Mulroney
" I am who I am, say what I say, do what I do. With no apology."
Edna Sweetlove
Wed, 2019-12-18 11:59
No.
The problem is in the line.
xxx
Edna
Poet(ess) to the Stars
Rottiestyl
Wed, 2019-12-18 12:32
If you have nothing constructive
To say I will say one more time stay off my work. You continue this I will report you. Done over
Rottie
Pegasus was a genius,
living within a suit of difference.
He liked what he was,
nodded in respect and
simply flew . . . away.
By: K. Mulroney
" I am who I am, say what I say, do what I do. With no apology."
Edna Sweetlove
Wed, 2019-12-18 12:45
Goodbye
You have my assurance I will not waste my time with you any more.
.
xxx
Edna
Poet(ess) to the Stars
Edna Sweetlove
Wed, 2019-12-18 12:46
Bye. .
Bye.
.
xxx
Edna
Poet(ess) to the Stars