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UNREAD OH! IT'S OKAY
Such a beautiful
lovely composed poem
by Neo's
poet organiser
so far unread
it makes my heart bleed
no one so far has read me
this week
wtf
what should I weep
founders are in no different position as me
why do I sulk and weep
none read me
Neo's have their own cotorie
I am part of none
but some do walk
as the autumn dawn
Stan was once
the present CEO
I had recommended
has totally forgotten me
WHO
Loverme ?
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
lovedly
Fri, 2018-12-21 01:17
Same to you Mark
MERRY XMAS to you and your dear inner family and friends too MERRY XMAS
zebra
Thu, 2018-12-20 17:29
Hi Lovedly
Feeling you, as myself, as we all do at times. The stars my friend. Sometimes the tide is out
What is a poet anyway but an aching heart reaching through the tides Very much a 12th house activity poetry is, for most of us anyway, 83% of Americans don't even have a 7th grade vocabulary What a state of dilapidation I feel the way you do often I tell myself keep writing …….WTF :)
lovedly
Fri, 2018-12-21 10:04
thanks ZEBRA
HI BUT I don't belong to the 12th house
of isolation limitation and grief
I don't believe in stars
they are only LANDMARKS HEAVENLY
I am a real smiley
YES WTF
keep composing
some will only missing good things
keep rolling zebra
Sparrow
Thu, 2018-12-20 19:19
Loved
Don't know how to spell it but it sounds like "two shay"
Have a great time out there you can always read some of mine if you become bored xx
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Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti