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It Didn't Rain!
It didn't rain.
So black and heavy
Are the clouds.
It didn't rain.
So thirsty is the land
And pale the lane.
It didn't rain.
The soul's crying,
Seeking cleansing
From the pain,
But
It didn't rain!
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raj
Mon, 2018-11-26 04:00
Welcome back Rula
Welcome back Rula
use of rain as a metaphor nicely used..
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raj (sublime_ocean)
Rula
Mon, 2018-11-26 14:09
Thank you
dear raj.
Appreciate it highly.
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IRiz
Mon, 2018-11-26 09:29
Hello Rula.
Hello Rula.
Great poem, so sad.
I like the repeated pattern. I worry you may cause a flood if you pray.
I want to re post your lines on Instagram. Ok?
IRiz
Rula
Mon, 2018-11-26 14:10
Thank you
Dear IRiz. I feel really honoured.
You have my permission.
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IRiz
Mon, 2018-11-26 15:16
thank you very much Rula
thank you very much Rula for detailes
how to preview yours and other potential submission look for my last blog here on Neopoet
IRiz
Rula
Fri, 2018-12-07 16:23
Mark
Wow!
Your comment means a lot:-)
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poem.er
Fri, 2018-12-07 07:34
It's poetry like this that
It's poetry like this that inspires me to keep writing.
I love it.