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IN DEFENSE OF RAW POETRY
Is poetry a mere form letter
just fill in the blanks
merely form and nothing better?
if it is, no thanks!
I'll leave perfection to professors
in their sterile lecture halls
let them be the art's possessors
if they have the balls
All poetry straight from the heart
has its own type of grace
it's time the perfectionists start
to wipe the smirks from their smug face
Style / type:
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
Just switching this from a blog post to a poetry post
Editing stage:
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Comments
gregwa8
Thu, 2018-09-20 21:42
love this!
love this!
scribbler
Thu, 2018-09-20 22:51
Hi Greg
Pleased you like this oldie I just dug back up
IRiz
Fri, 2018-09-21 16:25
I absolutely love your poem.
I absolutely love your poem.
the form is perfect for the content.
there will be no smirks on the faces of the meanest professors
IRiz
scribbler
Fri, 2018-09-21 18:35
Hi Riz
This was written years ago and I am glad it is still relevant. Appreciate the visit
Shadowdancer3349
Sat, 2018-09-22 18:00
Stan
dammit man right something bad lol Poetry is the inner self peeking through
scribbler
Sat, 2018-09-22 20:20
lol
I'll pull "Wurst Pome ever back up just for you lol. Appreciate your dropping by
weirdelf
Sun, 2018-09-30 01:10
and yet you seem to have changed your tone somewhat recently
glad to see that you can recognise the difference between strict form, craftsmanship and tools-of-the-trade.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
scribbler
Sun, 2018-09-30 11:35
ME ever change????
Too old to change now lmao. This oldie was brought back due to a minor edit but it does work fairly well as a protest against too strict adherence to rules doesn't it?
lovedly
Thu, 2018-10-04 23:11
if they have the balls
''had'' would be better no
and
I also show up old buried ah beauties
by just adding a minor edit
like a comma or ( )
and some one reads it
WOW
this is poetry ----was sleeping in drains till recently
none had the balls to comment on it
you know it
weirdelf
Fri, 2018-10-05 04:33
God choose for them
or if they are poets, choose for themselves,
God has always been a really crappy poet.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry