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Strange are my ways
Strange are my ways
I am a strange creature
In grief I laugh
it has to happen
why cry
be happy he/she
passed by
when all enjoy
I cry
no,
the tears are not of sadness
but joy
glad they also laugh
like I do always
else most Humans
I see are humourless
So being a stranger creature
is fun
All out of fear
are on the run
fear I alone shun
beg no pardon
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Rula
Fri, 2017-06-23 16:12
Awesome
I liks the honesty in this. I know many who laugh when they should cry and vs. My youngest son is most of the times acting like this.
"So being a strange(r) creature
is fun"
a typo maybe?
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lovedly
Fri, 2017-06-23 18:07
Happy I am Rula
I have company
so read my
bow to poets
in symphony you may
also like it
Scatterhatter
Sat, 2017-06-24 05:49
Run from fear?
Run from fear?
It snags
Face it off
Laugh cry grin
Pardon.... try no beg
lovedly
Sat, 2017-06-24 12:08
ha
haha
imagery only
no fear
o dear
Candlewitch
Sat, 2017-06-24 14:19
Good One!
I really like these lines:
All out of fear
are on the run
fear I alone shun
beg no pardon
apologize to no one for being yourself! :)
*hugs, Cat
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lovedly
Sat, 2017-06-24 20:28
Thanks cats for your appreciation
do hug all your lovely cats on my behalf
even though I am a dog lover
lost all/many of them small puppies variety
now one is a Golden Retriever
presented to me
my he is so lovingly and big
really loves me
I simply adore him
he nugs me
if he wants anything
and
he knows
he can overpower me
Candlewitch
Sun, 2017-06-25 08:52
:)
the love our pets bring to us is a precious gift. I love dogs, too. but we have only cats because my husband is a cat lover. if it were up to me alone, we would have both. enjoy your new furry friend :)
*hugs, Cat
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lovedly
Sun, 2017-06-25 20:41
shall thanks
but strange your hubby likes cats
most love dogs
any way pets are pets
lovely and homely
and faithful too
love me as a pet dog
will you
Candlewitch
Mon, 2017-06-26 10:54
dearest lovedly,
Steven, my husband, loves cats because they curl up in his lap and he can contentedly pat them and it is soothing for both. I know, a little dog can sit in your lap, too. but most little dogs are yappers that make a lot of noise. (he calls those ankle biters, lol) he thinks big dogs are too much work, and he doesn't have a lot of spare time. I like big dogs, myself, but I am physically unable to care for one.
*hugs, Cat
p.s.
I love you as a wonderfully creative poet and a good friend!
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lovedly
Mon, 2017-06-26 12:51
Thank you Cats
regards to your hubby
I know old age catches us all
take care