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My mom passed away early ...(BLUE GEM THIS)
Beautiful mom yours
I once composed
''Mom Smiles''
If you have some time
over a week end
do smile
my mom also will love you
She may not be able to give you a ring
she has now no Internet connection
where ever she may possibly be
but gaily she sends
a dozen rosy kisses for me
through the winds
the breeze
the storms
through rains
and
I fly back kisses daily
the clouds carry them slowly
but deliberately
She still smiles
back at me
No one ever reached 90
in my family
nor will me
you may see
I am just about to be touching
80 soonly
Style / type:
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Sparrow
Mon, 2017-05-29 13:47
Loved
A lovely piece for a memory that will always be with you, and the changes day to day just to say they love you,
Yours Ian..
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Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti
lovedly
Tue, 2017-05-30 00:36
grand words
coming from the monarch of poetry
neos
Sparrow
Tue, 2017-05-30 01:25
Loved
I always know that my family are with me as they are needed, and that includes Mum and Dad, two brothers, and two Sisters, who journeyed on over the last 50 years .
You just talk to yours in think, or real voice they will hear you.
Take care Young Bard, Blue Mountain coffee awaits, and as there is no time, it is already being brewed, poured, and drunk in harmony..
Yours as always, Ian..
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Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti
lovedly
Tue, 2017-05-30 02:04
Ian I like your ''spirit'' not as in SPIRIT you spk of
but good humour
Ian be spirited like me
will brew coffee
all will have with
us //////thee
thanks Ian
you are neos poetic
LIVE ...LY
man
Ha haaaaaaa