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Puter
I frequently use the word 'puter as an abbreviation for computer. Tonight someone, hearing it for the first time said they thought I was saying something rude. Which prompted this.
Puter pudenda
pubicly portentous
publicly portraited,
parole violated.
There was a young man whose new 'puter
could not have been any way cuter
but lacking pudenda
or pubic addenda
he just couldn't manage to root her
Review Request (Intensity):
Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
Last few words:
I have never before ticked-
"Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly) "
So I thought I would just for the craic.
Say what you fucking like.
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Comments
weirdelf
Sat, 2016-12-24 20:04
Not even going to pull me up
on the highly suspect 'portraited'?
cheers,
Jess
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