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bring a smile for me
Here is a smile
as a beautiful simile.
Life is short and sweet
let's be happy
till we meet
We may not meet
except in dreams
that itself will be a treat
let's each other
with warmth greet
Today has been a sad day
one niece
and
a sis
both had stroke today
God have mercy
we all have to go
all know
but heavens go slow
one by one
would make us happy
God you know
Don’t you
Amen
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
jane210660
Wed, 2016-06-22 08:39
Such a happy start and then
Such a happy start and then so sad.
I'm really sorry to hear your niece and sister have had a stroke, I will send you a metaphoric smile. Jxx
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lovedly
Wed, 2016-06-22 10:39
you raise my smile for miles
you are the first poet
who gives me poetic vibes
as I smile
all my while
I want to be a poet like ye
poetric lady
now howz this
syllables i eat ..as you love meat ...eat me
I don't count
I only eat
syllables are for kids
read my poetry
no two are alike
strike me out if you like
but continue to follow me
i compose
Shakesperience poetry
do read me
many follow me
I have over 11000 following
you may another one be
just an add on
if you wish lady/lords poet
your upcoming ones
I stand at the end of a
Cliff
awaiting a whiff
A push by the fast breeze
yet winds have no strength
like me
wait and see
I am PoetTree
jane210660
Wed, 2016-06-22 11:19
Lol
You are totally unique :-) Jxx
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lovedly
Wed, 2016-06-22 13:08
and lady that alone is my QUALITY NO QUALIFICATIONS
KEEP AT IT FAITHLY U B
SO FUNNY
THE FALL IS ENJOYED
MOSTLY BY GUYS AT NIGHTS
WHEN THEY EXPERIENCE ONE
WITH SOME ONE
UNKNOWN THEY FALL
SAID FREUD....
Must compose at least
9 poems a day
one good
rest as leaves
as if
for a rose
others will retrieve
also
have a thorn
stand by
loved by
guys
they get a feeling
they can prick
anyone who is stealing
what
their love and anaconda et all
the guys big and small
love it inside
all know
but why so small be tall all
love guys who long are
or who long
even with a small
bar
many out of closets
then come to go
heaven only
secretly knows
alidzain
Wed, 2016-06-22 13:28
loved
I hoped they'll be well.
Alid
lovedly
Wed, 2016-06-22 23:42
thanks we all live in
hopes alidz
they have come
to their respective homes
thanks
Sparrow
Thu, 2016-06-23 03:51
Loved
You know I read all comments fast but did pick up on
"you are the first poet
who gives me poetic vibes"
Are you suffering from amnesia lol Young Bard we love and support you always and have done for what seems like for ever.
I send healing thoughts to those of yours that are struggling with the physical body and hope their Spirit is able to carry them over these days,
Yours AS ALWAYS Ian .xxx
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Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti
lovedly
Thu, 2016-06-23 04:05
high Ian
you are already branded
why do you worry
after all its all poetry
more the merrier
may be
you are number one always for me
your very own named
bardy
you are sweet and LOVELY
Poem
Sat, 2016-06-25 14:04
The poem speaks your heart out
They will recover soon
Prayers
take care
lovedly
Sat, 2016-06-25 14:27
thank you poem
hope you become a starlit
light poet
publish more books
soon