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Color of a Poem
A creative thought
crimson, blue, dark or white in
ethereal shades
Style / type:
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
Seren
Sun, 2016-03-27 03:56
What a beautiful poem I can
What a beautiful poem I can offer nothing but praise
Wow !! And a sigh.
Love and big hugs Jayne xxx
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
raj
Sun, 2016-03-27 14:32
Hi Jayne
Good to see you. Thank you for the time and your appreciative comment. Means a lot..
Much love and warm hugs...stay well...
raj (sublime_ocean)
Seren
Tue, 2016-04-05 14:05
I decided to read this again
I decided to read this again before bed .. on ripples of thought I wish you goodnight. Shhh its actuall 4am the sun will be up in about and hour and forty lol better get a little rest
This is a very good poem my friend
Love always Jayne x
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
alidzain
Sun, 2016-03-27 09:54
Raj
I agree with Jayne. Kudos.
Alid
raj
Sun, 2016-03-27 14:33
Thanks Alid for you time..
Thanks Alid for you time...read and comment
Regards,
raj (sublime_ocean)
Roscoe Lane
Tue, 2016-03-29 00:15
Simple,
Simple and perfectly done. Regards Roscoe...
Roscoe Llane,
Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.
raj
Tue, 2016-03-29 13:41
Thanks Roscoe for your time,
Thanks Roscoe for your time, read and comment. Appreciated.
Regards,
raj (sublime_ocean)
raj
Tue, 2016-03-29 13:41
Thanks Roscoe for your time,
Thanks Roscoe for your time, read and comment. Appreciated.
Regards,
raj (sublime_ocean)
Rula
Tue, 2016-03-29 13:59
perfecto!
I like it
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raj
Tue, 2016-03-29 14:11
Thanks a lot Rula for your
Thanks a lot Rula for your comment. Good to know you liked it.
Regards,
raj (sublime_ocean)
raj
Fri, 2018-01-26 16:03
Thanks a lot Molly for your
Thanks a lot Molly for your words of appreciation which will encourage me to write more...
Regards...
raj (sublime_ocean)
scribbler
Fri, 2018-01-26 16:58
Hi Raj!
The color of thoughts is something I'd never considered. I wonder what color a lazy summer thought is? lol......stan
raj
Sat, 2018-01-27 14:16
Hi Stan
you got mr thinking for sure :)
Regards..
raj (sublime_ocean)
lovedly
Sun, 2018-01-28 06:49
I agree with stan
thoughts have
vibrations and impressions
eyes see colours..
and
raj
raj
Sat, 2018-01-27 14:17
Don't know what you mean by
Don't know what you mean by me dissociating...
Regards...
raj (sublime_ocean)
lovedly
Sun, 2018-01-28 06:50
sorry my error ...I have removed it
well thought is much better