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Connoisseurs kissers
Connoisseurs kissers
KISSING PARADE PRACTICE FOR VALENTINE TODAY
1. Some by kissing
others by missing
but a kiss is
just a kiss
2. Her open lips
thirst like mine
but I never beg
3. You seem to be
as hard up on kissing like me
I wish even the wind does kiss
but when I am out
the wind is breathless
it lazes
damned still
as if 'twas Gods will
no one should me
kiss
something I really miss
at least the sun does kiss
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
alidzain
Fri, 2016-02-12 14:55
loved
whydo you numbered them? Are you trying out something new?
Alid
lovedly
Fri, 2016-02-12 15:12
yes
different snaps were shown to me
for instant poetry
so numbered them
get your valentine
at least this year
she will love em
ok them
ok you man
alidz
all d bhhessttt
alidzain
Fri, 2016-02-12 15:29
loved
I don't celebrate valentine's day. Love is supposed to be celebrated everyday! On the other hand, my current situation doesn't give me much time to pursue romance.
Alid
lovedly
Fri, 2016-02-12 21:00
then when
u have a choice
rather as per you
add
No
sad though!
alidzain
Sat, 2016-02-13 01:31
Not sad, loved
Some of my dreams are coming true and I'm happy though a little tired due to hardwork that follows. Never thought I'll be able to represent my country in my malay poetry writing but I did it! I prove to the people who look down on me that I'm no pushover and yes I'm verrry happy with more request for my participation, using my works as part of humanitarian efforts!
It's a big wow to me..:D
Alid
lovedly
Sat, 2016-02-13 12:15
ur
great mamalay poet
alidzain
Sat, 2016-02-13 12:59
Thanks,
loved.
Alid
raj
Sun, 2016-02-14 13:29
good to see you experimenting
good to see you experimenting Lovedly as most often you do...
Regards,
raj (sublime_ocean)
lovedly
Sun, 2016-02-14 20:48
wow u do remember raj
thank u again happy Valentine
sublime