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Blame It
Blame it on a moodswing
blame it on the wind,
Blame it on something
that you didn't do, again;
blame it all on others,
or on society,
blame it all on god,
or how mother nature rules the sea;
blame it on a feeling,
that, absurdly does return,
blame it on a lesson
that you are yet to learn;
but, placing all this blame
what no one wants to see,
is that no one wants to say,
"I've got to blame this one on me."
Style / type:
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
Sound, "preachy"?
Editing stage:
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Comments
Timbo
Wed, 2011-01-12 06:51
excellent
excellent poem and message.
Tim
Kailashana2
Wed, 2011-01-12 06:59
It's not about blame, it's
It's not about blame, it's about RESPONSIBILITY, no one ever wants to accept blame, and that's how people are programmed, I think
Thanks for the poem, Doc. makes one think about all the preaching, blaming and finger pointing--yet nothing changes, not really and quite sadly.
~A