The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

This poem effectively uses a first-person perspective to delve into the mind of a character who is self-identified as a bully. The language and imagery are vivid, successfully creating a sense of the character's motivations and actions. However, the poem could benefit from a deeper exploration of the character's inner world.

The poem presents the character's actions and justifications clearly, but it lacks a deeper exploration of the character's emotions, thoughts, and motivations. It would be beneficial to delve into why the character feels the need to harm others, what satisfaction or fulfillment they derive from it, and how they perceive their own actions.

The poem could also benefit from a more nuanced portrayal of the character. Currently, the character is presented as unambiguously malicious, which may make it difficult for readers to empathize or engage with them. By adding more complexity to the character - perhaps by showing moments of doubt, regret, or internal conflict - the poem could become more engaging and thought-provoking.

The rhythm and rhyme scheme of the poem are generally consistent, which helps to create a sense of flow and cohesion. However, there are a few lines where the rhythm is disrupted, such as "Reeling the suckers in, is my plan to rise". Adjusting these lines to fit the established rhythm could improve the overall flow of the poem.

Lastly, it would be beneficial to consider the poem's ending. The current ending leaves the reader with a sense of the character's ongoing actions, but it doesn't provide a sense of closure or resolution. Developing a more conclusive ending could make the poem feel more complete and satisfying.

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You really have something original here! As I read this, I felt I was getting a look into the thoughts of (unfortunately) one of the people that has been closest to me over the last few years. More accurately - I see a window into her childhood mind.
The second verse really got things moving:
I pull the wings off the bugs I catch, (so devious, but innocent...you feel empathy for the kid)
drop them in my sisters soup. (wow, so visual and amusing!)
she deserves it, by my standards, to be sure (a hint of self-actualization - i actually, I like this kid here)

The whole poem, to me, hints at some unseen underlying tragedy, that both girls are involved in. I want to rescue her and make her see the world isn't so awful. "they do not know why I do what I do".... maybe I do!
It reminds me of the "iceberg" style of writing that Hemmingway used....you just show the tip, and your intuition is left to the fill in the massive real story under the surface.

Perfect title to this poem also!

Best,
Captain

Reading this I was a bit speechless, not knowing what to say. I was always the best model of the innocent kid, my sisters as well. however, I do believe the world is not the same world that I and my sisters grew in
I applaud your poetic talent in scripting this one.
Best wishes.

A wonderful take on The Blully. I wrote from the perspective of one who is bullied, but this perspective is unexpected. Great job!