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THE BULLY

Submitted by Twizzle48 on Sat, 2024-09-07 04:48

THE BULLY

Being a bully is a state of mind
Not always physical you’ll find
Nor even aggressive behaviour
I wonder, who needs a saviour
And who’s the real victim here
Bullies are bullied it may appear

Yet is this all psychological fluff
Those affected have had enough
Not long before one might snap
And react with more than a slap
To pursue a permanent solution
Finally ending all the persecution

Style / type: 
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Not actively editing
Contest: 
09/24 The Bully
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

Rula

Thu, 2024-09-12 10:01

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This entry really drew my attention. I like your take of the contest and can't agree more with you
These lines are definitely special and sum it all

I wonder, who needs a saviour
And who’s the real victim here
Bullies are bullied it may appear

Best wishes and thank you for sharing.

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Tawny023

Sat, 2024-09-14 11:16

This poem definitely packed a punch and the lines Not long before one might snap
And react with more than a slap
We’re both clever and hard hitting.
Great entry and I look forward to reading more.

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