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when friends depart
Fare thee well
We lost a good friend
send him this rose
Heaven knows
which way he goes
life's ways are unique
we also will soon follow
heaven!
if not, no one knows
and
we only our love
can only bestow
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Geremia
Mon, 2016-02-22 15:25
I am still here...at least
I am still here...at least part of me.:} am writing when I can, but I am losing...it will be soon, but I stay alive until...
How terribly sad I feel ..how terrified for what is ahead.
may Christ be always with you, my friend
joe
lovedly
Mon, 2016-02-22 16:50
BE BOLD JOE
Be not afraid of the inevitable morn
as you did not know
what happened when you were born
the same will happen
to all of us that one morn
stay alive
jive and play your master strokes
masterpieces have yet you to evoke
and
for that there is still time
the midnight bells are far yet to chime
let Joe your poetry rhyme
for ALL TIMES
ere tis time
Geremia
Thu, 2016-02-25 09:40
Ian is right. You still have
Ian is right. You still have many friemds. Loss is a tragedy, You will always have my friendshjip as long as I am still here.\joe
lovedly
Thu, 2016-02-25 16:48
we know Joe
we all love u so
as ur with us
all the more
u will get well soon
tell the priest to reform
u r not yet even 70!!!!!
a long way to
the Floridean sea
Sparrow
Wed, 2016-02-24 19:43
Loved
Friends will always be friends no matter where they are.
Some have to take journeys away from us and sometimes into places where there is no return ticket as we know them here, but keep faith with yourself and know that their impression on us and all they met will be an eternity of waves in that great universe.
Yours Ian..
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Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti
lovedly
Wed, 2016-02-24 20:22
He was an old friend
i a distant land with better health
'tis sad
scribbler
Thu, 2016-02-25 12:53
Hi
Friends never really leave. Even after they leave this plane they still live on in our memories.......stan BTW , in last 2 line you might consider dropping one of the "only"s........stan